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soundX
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Joined: 12 Apr 2012
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#1 · Posted: 12 Apr 2012 09:23
So i'm new on this forum and also just started on squidoo, so i decided to post my first lens made to get some opnions and critique about it, like what to improve and so on. Thank you all! http://www.squidoo.com/arsenal-army
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mountainmom5
Joined: 30 Aug 2007
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#2 · Posted: 14 Apr 2012 06:00
It's looking great - maybe a few more pictures would be nice 
It looks like a topic tho, that you could benefit by using a blog as well. Especially if you are planning to keep things updated on the games.
With a blog, you can add new posts as often as you want to and it just keeps growing. I would set up a few lenses on the game - and then use a blog along with it. Every time you add a new post to your blog you could link to your lens from it.
Cheers!
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talfighel
Joined: 17 Mar 2007
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#3 · Posted: 14 Apr 2012 10:14
Looks good.
You can add more photos and for sure you need to add more content.
Is that all your original content?
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happywife
Joined: 14 Aug 2007
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#4 · Posted: 18 Apr 2012 00:15
I think you've done a pretty good job getting started. I'm no squidoo expert, but felt it looks quite nice. I gave you a "like" to help you along. 
Blessings,
Angie
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robinincarolina
Joined: 11 Mar 2009
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#5 · Posted: 18 Apr 2012 10:29
Hi, I just liked your lens. There is a comment in your comments section that is spam posted by domyeadon101. Remove it, it can cause your lens to get locked. I should know, it happened to me.
There are a few typos in your into that you may want to fix as well, but bravo, it looks good.
If you do a blog on the subject, use the rss feed module in Squidoo to link it to your lens.
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